Matt Bellamy

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Make sure you review other people's work as well as posting your own, as that way you'll get more critiques. :) This is pretty good. You ...

This is an interesting poem. I like how it leaves the reader wondering and able to come to their own conclusions about what it really is, and that it could ...

This is a very emotional and well-written piece, I really like it. However there are a couple of things I think could be better: So what do I do? I ...

Hey! I quite like this but I have a few nitpicks so I'll take it line by line: Like at war, in love everything’s fair. Then again, they say, love ...

Hi! Well done on trying this style of poetry, personally I find it very difficult and don't like writing like that at all, but you've done it quite well. I'm ...

This is interesting. I have a few nitpicks - you spelt "definitely" wrong, so make sure you use a spell-check before you post. Also, the second line sounds unnecessary. I ...

I really like this. I think it flowed well and the rhyming was great. At times I felt forced into saying a line in a certain way, but only once ...

Hi! I quite liked this. I like the way you combined short and longer lines - normally this might disrupt the flow of the poem but here I think it ...

Hi again! I feel the same way about this poem as I did about the one I just reviewed of yours - it's good, but it's very short. I do ...

Hi! I think this is very sweet. It rhymes very well and flows nicely, and it's quite cute. I think the exclamation point at the end also adds to this ...

:lol: I like haiku, and I particularly like this one. It made me laugh. I suppose read outloud it doesn't really sound like a haiku - it's not very poetic, ...

Hey! I like the second poem and since haiku are a little difficult to critique, I can't really find anything wrong with it. It sounds good. However the first haiku ...

Hello! There is a lot of repetition in here, and when something is repeated once or twice, it works quite well, but if there's too much, it becomes less effective. ...

Hello! I'm not sure what to say to this, I found it rather strange. The end of the first line seemed to be forced to make it rhyme with the ...

I agree with MayApple that the lines are a little difficult to read when they're that long, so maybe try splitting them as she suggested. I also thought the first ...